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Oklahoma Rose
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0 posted 2009-08-18 10:52 PM


Heartfelt Memories

We shared our secrets
I opened up my heart to you
And told you the truth
Inspite of what I had said
I exposed myself to you

Memories are there
Of all those special times shared
Between you and I
Those most treasured times my friend
Will always be remembered

8-18-09


© Copyright 2009 Oklahoma Rose - All Rights Reserved
BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
1 posted 2009-08-18 11:08 PM


The best kind of treasures!
A Romantic Heart
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2 posted 2009-08-19 01:39 AM


Very heartfelt indeed!

~enjoyed your memories!

After all, that is what life is all about!

~ARH

Midnitesun
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Gaia
3 posted 2009-08-19 05:27 AM


A wonderfully kind write, Sue.
Marchmadness
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4 posted 2009-08-19 12:27 PM


Nice writing, Sue.
               Ida

brneyedgrly
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5 posted 2009-08-19 09:00 PM



susie

I love how this tanka presents on the page...

with your heartfelt words  

love you,

shellie

.

Alison
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6 posted 2009-08-22 06:01 AM


You are such a beautiful person and that is reflected in your poetry.

xoxoxo
A


I am thinking of you as you recover ... more hugs and kisses to you

xoxoxo

Heart2Heart
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Scotland/Norway
7 posted 2009-08-22 03:36 PM


A fine tribute to lovely memories shared.
Heart2Heart

Bloodline
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Oklahoma
8 posted 2009-08-23 11:55 AM


And so the soul is touched,
some memories are forever,


Bloodline

inkedgoddess
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9 posted 2009-08-24 08:45 AM


you are blessed
to have such beauty to recite here

Oklahoma Rose
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10 posted 2009-08-24 11:34 AM


Thank you all for taking the time to read and reply. It is much appreciated.
Margherita
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11 posted 2009-08-26 10:39 AM


Dear Sue, you wrote this beautifully, adorning it with the very strings of your heart.
The sense of gratitude is perceived.
Lovely work.
Reading of you recovering, I add my best wishes for perfect health to be quickly restored.

Love and hugs.
Margherita

Bill Charles
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12 posted 2009-08-26 11:29 PM


Oklahoma Rose - so many memories, very nice heartfelt write...

BC

Oklahoma Rose
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13 posted 2009-08-27 10:40 AM


Thank you all for reading and reply to my poem of heartfelt memories. I truly appreciate it. Some memories never do go away.
peaceseaker
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14 posted 2009-08-27 01:29 PM


Thank you for sharing what appears to be something very personal...a very nice ode written here in the wake of loss of a frienship or a loved one maybe..not sure, but it's lovely and touching....peaceseaker
WTBAKELAR
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15 posted 2009-08-27 01:55 PM


Hey, Sue,  often times we share many things with someone that we have kept inside for one reason or another.  It is good for the soul to share.  

Thank you for sharing this wonderful poem

Love always,
Tracey

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