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oh_ok
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since 2009-07-20
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0 posted 2009-08-18 01:41 PM


Assembly lines of greeting cards
One original “You’re Special”
Printed out on millions of copies verbatim
Isn’t that ironic...
Many will be bought and distributed this year
Holidays, birthdays, random days
Any day you need something said to say
We’re losing thoughtfulness in thought
And creativity in creating
Slow down if you’re moving too fast
When your mind can’t keep up
Slow down and unwind
Consider and contemplate things
Say what you need to say
Breathe in between each sentence
Think in between each thought
And say what you need to say

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brneyedgrly
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since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125
nowhere and everywhere
1 posted 2009-08-19 09:23 PM



I like this

welcome!

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Earth Angel
Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
2 posted 2009-08-20 01:14 PM


I hearya.

I do believe that a card where the sender has taken the time and put some thought into writing a special comment, is even more meaningful.


EA

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