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Yoinn Senior Member
since 2007-08-16
Posts 649Michigan 
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Song Bird With only a faint whisper She landed in my life. A delicate song bird. I never listened, Being to intent on Making my own music. With only a faint whisper She left my life. I had missed the love In her delicate song. Yoin Never do injustice to a man who isn't afraid to die because of it. - Yoin |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Love it! One of your best Yoinn. Ida |
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martiniat8 Senior Member
since 2003-06-21
Posts 897Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic |
oh so painful to lose those girls that can sing, they are a rare breed indeed |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
I sing..... soo sad to never hear the music, of ones heart! I think we hear it, but do we listen? Hugs~ARH  |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
oh la la, your poem is beautiful and thoughtful, the metaphor is accurate and make sense with all its aspects...I will keep this one if you don't mind... have a nice day yann |
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Yoinn Senior Member
since 2007-08-16
Posts 649Michigan |
thanks Ida, Thats a sweet thing to say. Yoin |
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Yoinn Senior Member
since 2007-08-16
Posts 649Michigan |
Sometimes ARH. Sometimes. Yoin |
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Yoinn Senior Member
since 2007-08-16
Posts 649Michigan |
thanks for your reply Yann and you have a wonderful day to my friend. Yoin |
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