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Chalmette Guy
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since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257
Louisiana

0 posted 2009-08-18 11:10 AM


With you I am brand new again
With you I feel fresh again
With you,
Not only when darkness falls
But with you,
At the end of it all

Together it seems just right
What could extinguish such a light,
As you and I?
Together even one time,
You and I
Forever in my mind

We could go on again as two
Something I’d rather not do
We are more
Than the sum of equal parts
We are more
Than broken, beating hearts

Lucky is me now that I am found
Lucky is me, finally unbound
Who could ever
Denounce such a thing as this?
Who would never
Fall from such a first kiss?


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Yoinn
Senior Member
since 2007-08-16
Posts 649
Michigan
1 posted 2009-08-18 11:27 AM


I love poetry about beginnings. I felt your celebration in this one.

Yoin

Never do injustice to a man who isn't afraid to die because of it.  - Yoin

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