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zaaclindsay
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since 2009-08-12
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0 posted 2009-08-18 12:11 PM



If I should lose my way in the darkness,
would you come and take my hand?
And if my world should fall apart,
would you help me understand?

And if I should want to linger
close to your heart,
tell me would you let me in;
would you open up your heart?

Would you say you love me too;
If only in whispers, I don't care
But my heart can't go on wishin’,
I need you here…

So, say you love me...
say you love me too.

I've been down this road before
one too many times.
And my heart can sense the danger
of drowning in your eyes.

But if I found the courage
to let my heart come shining through
could you feel me trembling,
and would you say you love me, too

Would you say you love me, too?
If only in whispers, I don't care.
‘cause my love for you is stronger
than the fear…

So say you love me...
Won't you say you love me...
Say you love me, too.

© Copyright 2009 David I Graf - All Rights Reserved
brneyedgrly
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1 posted 2009-08-18 12:22 PM



very nice debut here mr lindsay

welcome!

.

flesh, blood, bone, love...twisted
~ L. Hall

A Romantic Heart
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2 posted 2009-08-19 02:03 AM


I read this as a song...I could hear it!

~ARH

zaaclindsay
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3 posted 2009-08-19 11:07 AM


thank you very much.  and yes it was written as lyrics, in an old 1980's big band style like Journey.

zaac

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4 posted 2009-08-22 02:04 AM


Makes me want to hear it.

Thank you for sharing.
A

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