»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #45
»
Perhaps Tomorrow
| Open Poetry #45 |
|
Perhaps Tomorrow |
|
|
JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Perhaps Tomorrow Today is not my favorite day. All of my dreams didn't come true today. I have waited so long, my wanting years having come and gone, waiting for my favorite day, that day when she'd come to me and never again go away. "That will forever be the day when my beautiful lover came to stay." Still I won't take this occasion to complain, nor will I waste chocolate tears in the rain, I shall not be consumed by strawberrys soaked in whipped cream of sorrows, no not me, no not me, not as long as I still have a tomorrow. JamesLee 09August 2009 |
||
| © Copyright 2009 JamesMichael - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
jody5 Senior Member
since 2005-12-21
Posts 876California, U.S.A. |
I loved this poem the immagery was so well done. Hugs Kimberly |
||
|
jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Very nice James...as long as you can hold on to 'tomorrow', today will never be all bad. j. |
||
|
JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you jody and jwesley for the wonderful responses...James |
||
|
2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
your poem is deeply appreciated because there is always an opened door in the room of passion, you described it with talent and sweet simplicity...Thanks for the poem. yann |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
