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Yoinn
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0 posted 2009-08-16 05:03 PM




Love Deepens

Passions fade
Fires cool
Desires wane
Truths fool
Money burns
Qualities cheapen
Hope dies, but…

Love deepens.

© Copyright 2009 Tim W. - All Rights Reserved
crosscountry83
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1 posted 2009-08-16 05:04 PM


Amazing, short, but very powerful. Just...amazing...

Rileigh

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2 posted 2009-08-16 09:17 PM




Wonderful and true
and that's all I need to say.

Alison

martiniat8
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3 posted 2009-08-17 03:19 AM


Hope dies but love deepens, quite the paradox, like it, a lot!
jody5
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4 posted 2009-08-17 03:32 AM


That's it in a nut shell.  Good write!
                           Hugs Kimberly


Yoinn
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5 posted 2009-08-17 01:10 PM


Rileigh,
Thank you, your kind words always lifts my mood.

Yoin

Yoinn
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6 posted 2009-08-17 01:11 PM


All I need to say over and over is Thank you
alison. your replies are sunshine in the rain.

Yoin

Yoinn
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7 posted 2009-08-17 01:18 PM


Thanks Martini.

Paradox is the perfect word.

Yoin

Yoinn
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8 posted 2009-08-17 01:19 PM


thanks for the reply and the hug. Its nice to meet you Kimberly.

Yoin

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9 posted 2009-08-17 02:34 PM


Short but so sweet.
               Ida

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