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rachaelfuchsberger
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0 posted 2009-08-15 10:13 PM


In the comfort of seclusion
Lost and without reason
We try to find some peace and
We try to find something to which we can hold on
But we get knocked down again
Then we stand up and speak again
And we’re treated like the prodigal son
Leave him alone and around he’ll come
But what if we are not just some
What if we are not in seclusion
Trying to find our peace and
What if the government is the only thing to which we can hold on
And they keep knocking us down again
And we stand up and speak again
But we’re treated like the prodigal son again
Leave them alone and around they’ll come again
And what happens when we don’t come again
What happens if they can’t knock us down again
What happens if we continue to stand and speak again
What happens when we’re the only thing to which the government can hold on
In the comfort of illumination
Guiding ourselves with reason
We’ll find some peace and
The world will be whole again
In the comfort of seclusion

Arana Darkwolf

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Yoinn
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1 posted 2009-08-16 09:52 AM


I like your statement in this one Arana. We all have a voice. Nice writing.

Yoin

rachaelfuchsberger
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2 posted 2009-08-16 12:36 PM


Yoin,
Thank you for the compliment. I'm glad you enjoyed this.

Arana Darkwolf

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