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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2009-08-14 04:26 PM


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This morning
Out of nothing

As the sun rose
And the air turned
A pale blue

Just beyond
The green corn
Summer grasses
Flecked with dew

River willows
Yellow flowers
On a low hill
Where I no longer go

You
Coming to me
Through the snow


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amk377
Member
since 2009-08-11
Posts 58
South Carolina
1 posted 2009-08-15 04:17 AM


very beautiful...I could picture everything in this in my mind. that is the sign of a true gift! beautiful!

"we have but a moment...only one moment"

peaceseaker
Member
since 2009-07-29
Posts 161

2 posted 2009-08-15 07:10 PM


short but oh so sweetly written, a lot of tender feelings went in to this I think...enjoyed a great deal....peaceseaker
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