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..if someone gave you a wish..
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..if someone gave you a wish.. |
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ninjawild Junior Member
since 2009-08-11
Posts 33u.s. army |
..my heart is full of love.. ..but i find myself screaming inside.. ..i want to break free of all that binds me.. ..to be where i want to be.. ..for all that stands in me.. ..i wish you could see.. ..that what my heart holds.. ..should not be held alone.. ..what i cherish.. ..i wish to share.. ..id give it all... ..and only to one.. ..like fools gold.. ..i dont want to rush in.. ..but like a river.. ..every inch has its own pace.. ..its up to the path.. ..be the rocks and stone.. ..i must know what turn i must take.. ..let me know if this is the right way.. ..want to see where it goes.. ..have we already seen what it can be like.. ..it can be our goal.. ..if waiting proves more than little convinces.. ..i wait so it will be proven.. ..my promises are clear.. ..i am confident.. ..i have shared a very small but strong part.. ..of what i am craving deeply to give.. ..the sample was sweet and caring.. ..thoughtful in its own form.. ..to be cherished.. ..a symbol of what can be.. ......if someone gave you a wish...... ......and told you that if you truely believed that it would come true...... ......what would you wish for?...... |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
ninjawild - I can feel your heart when reading this. Pure honest write... BC |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A pleasure to read...James |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
That ending poses a tough question for most people. To limit it to one wish is difficult! LOL, I think I'd need at least two wishes. Your poetry is passionate, and filled with deep yearning. |
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