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Yoinn
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0 posted 2009-08-13 06:47 PM



look on my dogs face
the first snowfall of the year
laughter in his bark

yoin

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ninjawild
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since 2009-08-11
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u.s. army
1 posted 2009-08-13 06:57 PM


pretty good.. it puts an imagery of how it seems sometimes that our dogs do too have a sense of humor..
crosscountry83
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since 2009-07-30
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2 posted 2009-08-13 07:01 PM


Absolutely delightful!

Rileigh

Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
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Waukegan
3 posted 2009-08-13 07:20 PM


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Very good

Read again
With your permission, would like to add
this to my Word file of poems by others.
If yes, who shall I show as author?

Again very good


John


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Yoinn
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4 posted 2009-08-14 09:01 PM


Thank you Ninja, my dog sure makes me laugh.

Yoin

Yoinn
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5 posted 2009-08-14 09:02 PM


thank you Rileigh,
Its always good to hear from you.

Yoin

Yoinn
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6 posted 2009-08-14 09:02 PM


Thanks John,

Glad you liked it

Yoin

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