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Chalmette Guy
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since 2009-03-11
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0 posted 2009-08-13 04:28 PM


Would thou offer but a brief respite?
Even under temporary conditions,
Is not a moment still a moment?
If that is all thee have
To hold onto,
Would not that count just the same?
Many times thy gaze lay disturbed,
Troubled by unconscious thought
And of toils too many to tame
Rest seems an unattainable thing
Yet the power lies ever
Just below the surface within
Thy peace and comfort
Used to be held steadfast
But before your eyes, slipped away
Taken on the wind with incense
Borne of sleepless offerings,
And onto wishes of another day
Thou art the catalyst for inspiration
For even a moment, if not eternal
Thus the words, a seductive proliferation
Given the choice between
The hardness of unfinished stone
Sought for most rare and coveted value,
And softness as the sky itself,
Thee would be all of this
Polished lovingly a softer shade of blue

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Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now
1 posted 2009-08-13 05:24 PM


Chalmette Guy - nice write, I especially like \a softer shade of blue/, sensuous...

BC

Bella Mafia
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since 2009-08-10
Posts 8

2 posted 2009-08-14 03:50 AM


this peice takes you to a different time, place, world.I like it.
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