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Dark Star Member
since 2008-02-20
Posts 392Lost in your eyes |
Heat The suns rays, penetrate the dry earth. I walk these sands of time, looking for the right somebody. Heat crawls through my system, taking over every inch of me. The instinct is still there, beneath my mortal skin. Two times a month, heat strikes, enveloping my body.  Lana |
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crosscountry83 Member
since 2009-07-30
Posts 345 |
The poem is about heat... I like that way the words make a torch, if you get what I mean. Rileigh |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Lana, personally, I think that heat is from your birthday candles! Blow them out! BLOW them out!  Seriously, I like the heat in this poem. It's the kind that doesn't give me indegestion. Happy Birthday. Alison |
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Dark Star Member
since 2008-02-20
Posts 392Lost in your eyes |
thanks guys, heat is a nagging b***** lol and thank you for the birthday wishes.... Lana |
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