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Artic Wind
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0 posted 2009-08-12 04:27 PM



        

Cascading Rain Drops

Cascading rain drops,
heal earth's vernal wounds.
No longer shall nature suffer,
for dismal clouds bring heavens showers.

~

ARCTIC WIND

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Robert E. Jordan
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since 2008-01-25
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1 posted 2009-08-12 04:41 PM


Yo dear Artic Wind,

Rain showers are great.  I don't mind them at all.

Love Bobby

brneyedgrly
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since 2009-06-08
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nowhere and everywhere
2 posted 2009-08-12 09:10 PM



you make me like

the rain



.

secondhanddreampoet
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a 'Universalist' !
3 posted 2009-08-12 10:03 PM


fine photo-image and 'write' !

applause!!

ninjawild
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since 2009-08-11
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u.s. army
4 posted 2009-08-12 10:07 PM


i agree.. i love the rain and its been a rainy week because of hurricane felicia, so this is kinda making me appreciate the rain were getting a bit more..
miscellanea
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5 posted 2009-08-12 11:26 PM


Arctic,

   You've written a lot of good ones, but the clarity and brevity in this are phenomenal!   This is a keeper among keepers!!!  This tells it ALL!  AMAZING!  Brilliantly written!

WAY TO GO, Arctic!  

Artic Wind
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6 posted 2009-08-12 11:34 PM


Bobby, I am water type person, I love anything to do with the element of water. I thought to myself; well, there has been some very sticky days here in the summer, why not bring down the cool showers! I love a nice cool shower in rain.


ARCTIC WIND

Artic Wind
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7 posted 2009-08-12 11:34 PM


brneyedgirly!

Thanks! I am glad that I made you like the rain!


ARCTIC WIND

Artic Wind
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8 posted 2009-08-12 11:35 PM


SHDP ~

Thank you!


ARCTIC WIND

Artic Wind
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9 posted 2009-08-12 11:35 PM


ninjawild ~

I hope no one gets hurt. Yes, rain can be soothing and wonderful as well.


ARCTIC WIND

Artic Wind
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10 posted 2009-08-12 11:37 PM


Miscellanea ~

Now now, I came onto Pip with this AMAZING surprise. Thanks for this lovely reply, I'm like jumping for joy. I'm glad that not only did you receive the message written, but for commenting on my past poems as well! That gives a writer extreme confidence. Gotta thank you for that one.

Also, saving it?! OMG, like thank you! That was a true early birthday present!


ARCTIC WIND

crosscountry83
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11 posted 2009-08-12 11:47 PM


I'd have to agree with Miscellanea.  I'd also say more, but it was already said.  Amazing job!

Rileigh!

latearrival
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12 posted 2009-08-13 01:00 AM


ARCTIC WIND,  You have grown in leaps and bounds.good work. I loved this one. latearrival
Alison
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13 posted 2009-08-13 01:14 AM


AW,

This is true, beautiful and a breath of fresh air all in itself.

Alison

miscellanea
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14 posted 2009-08-13 01:20 AM


Birthday?  

Happy early-birthday to you,
Early happy b-day to you
Happy birthday
Happy birthday
Early birthday to you!

Enjoy the cake and limited number of candles (YOU lucky younster, YOU!

Marchmadness
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15 posted 2009-08-13 04:27 AM


Lovely poem , nice picture.
                         Ida

A Romantic Heart
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16 posted 2009-08-13 06:18 AM


Heal the world....make it a better place!!

HAPPY EARLY BIRTHDAY!







~ARH

A Romantic Heart
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17 posted 2009-08-13 06:26 AM



miscellanea
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18 posted 2009-08-13 08:13 AM


And the picture!  OUtSTANDNG!  If my mind would go into the memorization mode, this would be a poem and pic that I'd want to memorize by heart.

You do good, Kiddo...

Oklahoma Rose
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19 posted 2009-08-13 10:39 PM


This is beautiful Artic Wind. We have had plenty of that cascading rain. It sure made the grass grow. LOL!

Happy Birthday! May all your wishes and dreams come true.

[This message has been edited by Oklahoma Rose (08-14-2009 10:40 AM).]

Bill Charles
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20 posted 2009-08-13 11:04 PM


Artic Wind - I love to hear the rain, as it cleanses the earth. And especially this poem that you have written about it...

BC

Earth Angel
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21 posted 2009-08-15 10:42 AM



Happy Birthday, Dear ARCTIC!!

I believe you to be a healer, yourself, dear Michael.

For one thing, you have the power to heal through your poetry.

I have never opened a post of yours where I did not let out an audible sigh with its profound beauty. You have a gift.

Love & Healing Light
and a BIG BIRTHDAY HUUUGGGG!
EA

Artic Wind
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22 posted 2009-09-03 05:50 PM


Crosscountry!

I am so happy that I remembered about this poem. Sorry for the delay in thanking everyone! thanks, I am pleased that you enjoyed it.


ARCTIC WIND

Artic Wind
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23 posted 2009-09-03 05:51 PM


LateArrival, thank you! ~ Thanks for the love


ARCTIC WIND

Artic Wind
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24 posted 2009-09-03 05:52 PM


Alison, your poems as well. Thank you


ARCTIC WIND

Artic Wind
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25 posted 2009-09-03 05:53 PM


Misc! LOL Well, I do like the limited birthday candles! I've gotten to the point now when they start using the numbers, save time finding a place for all those single candles LOL


ARCTIC WIND

Artic Wind
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26 posted 2009-09-03 05:53 PM


Marchmadness, thanks!


ARCTIC WIND

Artic Wind
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27 posted 2009-09-03 05:54 PM


ARH ~ THANK YOU!!!! for all those wonderful pictures as well.


ARCTIC WIND

Artic Wind
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28 posted 2009-09-03 05:55 PM


Misc! WOW, thank you for all of those wonderful replies. I'm speechless. Thanks a bunch


ARCTIC WIND

Artic Wind
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29 posted 2009-09-03 05:55 PM


Oklahoma Rose ~ Thanks !!!


ARCTIC WIND

Artic Wind
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30 posted 2009-09-03 05:56 PM


Bill Charles, thanks! Glad you liked it


ARCTIC WIND

Artic Wind
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31 posted 2009-09-03 05:57 PM


Earth Angel, and a special thanks to you for everything that you've done! Thank you for all the birthday presents here on Pip!


ARCTIC WIND

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