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A beetle named Bob

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crosscountry83
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My attempt at a limerick, feel free to criticize

Once lived a beetle named Bob,
Who wished to become a frog.
Got his wish one day,
and went out to play,
but then got squashed by a log.

Rileigh

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hahahahaha i love it!
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