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Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269
Pennsylvania

0 posted 2009-08-11 07:27 PM


Good evening Bill Charles, How do you do?
I’m learning romantic endeavors from you
For you write about passion, your pure blooded kin
You live love, and love is what seeps from within

Good evening Bill Charles, the veins of your ink
Are deeper and much more intense than you think
What woman on earth could not easily thrive
On the beautiful passion on which you survive

Do the thoughts of an angel inspire your words?
Or are they the echoes of sweet woodland birds?
Do you speak in soft whispers the same words you write?
If so, then I’ll wait for a whisper
                                                      - good night


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Earth Angel
Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
1 posted 2009-08-11 07:39 PM


Liz, I am so pleased to see you write this poem of adore for our Troubadouring Romance Man! He will be thrilled with this! ~ To be sure!

A gift from one loving heart to another!

I have a huge smile on my face!


Linda

Oklahoma Rose
Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586
Oklahoma USA
2 posted 2009-08-11 10:22 PM


Awwww Liz, this is beautiful. Yes, he is a romantic one, isn't he?
Bill Charles
Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now
3 posted 2009-08-12 03:22 PM


Elizabeth - thank you for writing this. I had many thoughts when I read it, and decided to write an answer, which I called "Good Morning Elizabeth"...

Thank you again, from my heart...

BC

Chalmette Guy
Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257
Louisiana
4 posted 2009-08-12 04:47 PM


Wow, such passion here. You two write so lovingly, longingly. Well done, and well said.
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