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peaceseaker
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0 posted 2009-08-11 10:42 AM


  
The Willow

Sun drops as tear drops
Just as willow weeps its shaded
Shadows of mourning

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Alwye
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In the space between moments
1 posted 2009-08-11 11:59 AM


Poignant, sad, and beautiful.  Nice haiku!
Earth Angel
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2 posted 2009-08-11 01:20 PM


A mournful scene ~ vividly, yet softly, depicted.


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Heart2Heart
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3 posted 2009-08-11 04:14 PM


Sentimental and beautiful words in a fine ku.  Lovely sweet peaceseeker
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4 posted 2009-08-11 06:58 PM


Enjoyed...James
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5 posted 2009-08-11 07:43 PM


Very expressive and solemn.  I enjoyed reading and visualizing your poem.


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peaceseaker
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6 posted 2009-08-12 06:47 AM


Alwye...thank you so much..glad you enjoyed....peaceseaker
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7 posted 2009-08-12 06:48 AM


Earth Angel....Thank you so much for reading and the nice compliment....ps
peaceseaker
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8 posted 2009-08-12 06:49 AM


h2h..I appreciate you reading and leaving your oh so welcome comment....ps
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9 posted 2009-08-12 06:50 AM


JamesMichael

Thank you for taking the time to read and comment..glad you enjoyed...ps

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10 posted 2009-08-12 06:51 AM


miscellanea-your lovely compliment means a lot...thank you...ps
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