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..a story of two..
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..a story of two.. |
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ninjawild Junior Member
since 2009-08-11
Posts 33u.s. army |
--Prelude-- ..wisdom comes from the better choices of stupidity.. ..curiosity is above all the best teacher.. ......a story of two...... ..once was said that they would never leave.. ..as time went without word or notice.. ..the water was falling from rocks and trees.. ..a child leaped from a swing with wonder.. ..its the plant of dream in his mind.. ..laying the seeds throughout the wind.. ..among the mornings and nights.. ..numbers begin to defiantly weigh decisions.. ..from one to one.. and two as two.. ..steps from the first to many to follow.. ..and many more steps to come.. ..through the rainy days.. ..and the leafy fallings.. ..after the white snows.. ..before the red summers.. ..all would come to a soaring slow motion.. ..a start of something newly found.. ..a smile followed by another.. ..a deep glance into anothers.. ..thoughtful questions of mystery.. ..leading to a happy discovery.. ..when time became still.. ..there were only two.. ..when there were only two.. they made one.. ..defying all numbers in existence.. ..like winning what can't be won.. ..like a step from the shy shadows.. ..into the vast judgments of light.. ..thoughtful words from the never ending deep.. ..newer things to add to life's many and ever changing perceptions.. ..the sheep decide to jump quicker.. ..the suns fall and the moons rise.. ..two as one make promises and devotions.. ..like predictions without reflection on a shimmering stream.. ..the fruit tasted sweet as ripe and taut.. ..but can one find.. ..and detail the screams from two battle fields on one's soul?.. ..what two making one made with the one seperate from the two.. ..was imaginary as a toddler's favorite angel.. ..but it still brings a smile to sudden blank faces.. ..as it seems looking through thin material.. ..into a picture of line and curve.. ..when removed, shall true feelings emerge from the detail?.. ..devastating a blissful state of minds.. ..the one desolving.. ..a statement usually replied to is left unspoken.. ..for a reason of explanation as to why.. ..for one of two said.. ..im sorry.. [This message has been edited by ninjawild (08-12-2009 09:57 PM).] |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"..like a step from the shy shadows.. ..into the vast judgments of light.. ..thoughtful words from the never ending deep.." A very interesting read, one I'll come back to again. Enjoyed. I highlighted one section I especially liked. Welcome to Pips, ninjawild. (might want to correct a typo "excistence") |
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cmgiles1 New Member
since 2009-08-12
Posts 5 |
Very interesting poem. I truly enjoyed reading it. Well written. I will definitely come back and read it again. Great job. |
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