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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! 
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
encore, encore!! Love this tender beauty!! |
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Inspired-8 Member
since 2008-04-14
Posts 311Pluto |
Haiku ga yokudekimasita! Excellent haiku : ) |
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deleeme Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766NEW ENGLAND, USA |
An elegant visual with this excellent haiku. This reminds me so very much of Marge. You have a wonderful flavor and flair going on with this one! Very Good! David I thank the LORD everyday He has given me something to say And to share with others, My Friends, my sisters, my brothers! To God Be the Glory! |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
excellent Alison, I shared your inspiration with grace and beauty...thanks for the ravishing poem. yann |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
oh my! you have written another masterpiece lovely Ali-girl.. it is so beautiful!  RDB xxBe kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Haiku magic, Alison. Ida |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
Alison, this little haiku is absolutely beautiful. You have a magic pen, there. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Oh, Alison! That was precious ~ and cute! Hey, poppies! Blow in the wind and strut your stuff! Wallflowers can't compete with showy flowers like you!   LL |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana |
Queen of the Haikus. lol |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo dear Alison, This works very well as a haiku. Love Bobby |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Blusey girl, Thank you so much. You make me want to come out and dance and sing ... now that would scare the PiPsters off, believe me. xoxoox A - Inspired-8, You made me laugh after Blusey made me smile. Love the word. Thank you for reading and commenting. By the way, welcome to the Plutoite! Alison - David, What a totally beautiful thing to say to me. Thank you. xoxoxo Alison - yann, I love that we share that quality. You are a special person to me here on these boards. xoxoxo Alison - RDB, Thank you. You are too - beautiful. xoxoox Ali-girl - Thank you, dear Ida. Hugs, Alison - Sue, You are always so danged kind to me. Thank you. xoxoxo Alison - Linda, I feel your sunshine this morning. Thank you for bringing it to my little haiku. xoxoox Alison - Cg, Why thank you for noticing my crown. xoxoo A - Thank you, Bobby. Love, Alison |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
Ali your words dance and your poppy has the most beautiful shades of pink love ya Shel . |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
VERY pleasant! |
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ninjawild Junior Member
since 2009-08-11
Posts 33u.s. army |
i really like this.. it flows perfectly about flowers.. |
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crosscountry83 Member
since 2009-07-30
Posts 345 |
best of the flowers poetry made by Alison spiffy haiku! Rileigh |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Shel, Thank you on behalf of my poppy. The wind was blowing it around and it was dancing but good. xoxoox Alison - Bruce, It wanted to bring you a smile. She's a flirt that way. Hugs to you, Alison - ninjawild, I love flowers! Thank you for stopping and enjoying our Dancing Queen. Alison - Rileigh, You are quickly rising higher on my Sweetie List. Thank you. xoxoox Alison |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
I AGREE! Graceful! This tripped along just beautifully, Alison! Good goin', Gal! misce' |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Thank you. I just take the pictures and they do the rest. xoxoxo Alison |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
They do it gooD, they do! While I'm back, thought I'd let you know, I changed the Double Double D out again. If you liked it enough to put in your library, you may rather have the newer version. (Just thought I'd let you know.) I think I'm finished changing it out now. Why is it that after you read it on the blue pages you see so many things (and mistakes) you didn't see before? I wonder. I proof them ahead of time, really! Have a great double double D day! hugs, misce |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Sometimes they do okay and I say, "Hey, you little poet fingers are keepers!" Thank you, misce. I'll check it out and change out my save. I know what you mean about seeing the flaws on the blue pages after we post it. Think it's something magical here. xoxoxo A |
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Misty Lilacs Senior Member
since 2005-11-15
Posts 1060White Birch Forest |
This is a BRAVO kind of poem! Love the poppies and your words that go with them. You are one fabulous poetess. ooxx ________________________ |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Marti, Do you have any idea how big my smile is because of you. It's huge-freakishly large. Oh my, what am I going to do! (grins) Seriously. Thank you.  Alison |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Oh, how graciously you make them dance, those Poppies, dear Alison. Most beautiful, glad I found this. Love, Margherita  |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Margherita, Thank you for going back in time and reading. You make me smile so often. xoxoox Alison |
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peaceseaker Member
since 2009-07-29
Posts 161 |
LOVED THIS!!! The imagery is great in this ku.....peaceseaker |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
peaceseaker, Thank you so much. A |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) I've always marveled at the august, vehement colors of poppies in an open meadow, as they just seem to provide an ebullient ember no other flower can match, or that autumn's leaves can rival during the spring and summer months! (huggies) This is a most buoyant, spiritually lifting senryu, dearest Alison, now off I go to dance in the wind despite having been up forty-four consecutive hours without sleep!    Have a wonderful new week, my friend!  XOXO, Lisping Hibiscus "If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to each other" |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Forty-four hours with no sleep??? Noah! That's not good for you. You need to dance in your dreams and get some rest. I know what you mean about the color of the poppies though. They are fragile and so vibrant. I do love them. Thank you for reading, my dear friend. Alison |
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