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Ripples In The Moon
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Ripples In The Moon |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT 
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darkness in an empty silence starless lost behind the clouds confusions found along its day ripples in the moon timeless something is still in the air a fullness filled breaking the silence parting through the night its weary way of ripples in the moon echoes the good things that we remember let-goes free releasing gravity of times less departing and moments which stay within ripples in the moon darkness lost timelessly filled echoing freely "You don't have to go |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
I'm not sure I got to read you before when I first joined. But now that I'm able to come back more, I'm glad I caught one of your works. You are a thoughtful writer and seem to have a great blend of fact and fancy. Excellent! ·´~`·»Brett«·´~`· |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
yes i like how you blend science and romance into an intergalactic momentary release of awe |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
starless lost _________________ welcome back, Ct! . flesh, blood, bone, love...twisted |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Love the star dusting and soft edged rippling. Always a pleasure, ct~ |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Yep, I thought I would like this one and I was right. I do like it and am glad to know that I am right again. Thank you and good writing - from one who is right. A |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
your poem is like an echo of sensations, enjoyed my read. yann |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
oh this is truly a beautiful poem.. you have gifted us well here.. thank you  RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
This really is quite lovely, ct.  And it is beautifully laid out. "darkness" "ripples in the moon" "timeless" "of ripples in the moon" "echoes" "within ripples in the moon" ~ And you tie it all up beautifully with your closing lines. "darkness lost timelessly filled echoing freely"  Linda |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
darkness in an empty silence starless lost behind the clouds confusions found along its day ripples in the moon timeless  ~~**~~ |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
just back for another read Craig... thank you Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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