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Lazy Sunday |
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martiniat8 Senior Member
since 2003-06-21
Posts 897Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic |
It's too hot Outside And my body temperature seems to have Malfunctioned What do normal people do With their excess exercise Energy I seem to be spinning my wheels Lacking skills In persuit of women That are Emotionally unavailable Or simply Unattainable The deck feels Stacked against me And I Am In the Big Blind I'm too old And too tired To start over again Despite the rumors I'd be big in Japan And yet I reach out My hand Knowing There's no one there In the shifting Sand |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
I am liking this a lot. A |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
feel you here, martini will this help?  . flesh, blood, bone, love...twisted |
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Yoinn Senior Member
since 2007-08-16
Posts 649Michigan |
How did I miss this one. Can feel you through this one Brad. Keep that hand open. hey "big in Japan"..is that a Tom Waits reference?...I LOVE Tom Waits. Yoin |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
I feel ya !! Oh I so understand, but I don't have that problem with women  The only time we waste is the time we spend thinking we are alone. |
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martiniat8 Senior Member
since 2003-06-21
Posts 897Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic |
actually big in japan has several meanings for me, Ive been thinking of teaching English overseas and Im 6'6 about 280lbs, maybe a subconscious Waits reference, but about the same jist and a t-shirt a friend of mine was wearing about being big in spain. I will check out those lyrics, though, I like Waits too actually, the situation is not quite as hopeless as I feared. Thanks guys |
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