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Open Poetry #45

Wang Wei Sunday

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2009-08-09 11:39 AM

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Dawn sunlight
Through an open window

Wind through trees
Moving—summer flowers

Waves wash on shore
Passing cars on the road below

No one now ever comes or calls—
I couldn’t care less

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Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

1 posted 2009-08-09 12:39 PM

Yo John,

It's great to spend Sunday with the great poets.

Bobby

miscellanea
Member Elite

since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
OH

2 posted 2009-08-09 01:42 PM

I love those days when the sun comes in through my window, warming face and awakening senses to slight breeze, the gentle cascade of water and distant sounds of the interstate. Especially like the first two stanzas.

miscellanea

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

3 posted 2009-08-09 04:50 PM

I like this one, John -

not that you care less (grins at you).

A

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