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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
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Waukegan

0 posted 2009-08-09 02:02 AM


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Two boys
And men

My father
And I

Hunting
Fishing

Shooting clothespins
With a BB gun
In the backyard


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Heart2Heart
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since 2009-05-15
Posts 738
Scotland/Norway
1 posted 2009-08-09 03:21 AM


Liked this one ! Probably because I've done the same (but with my brother), yes and I'm a tomboy at heart, believe it or not, hehe !  Nice one !
Heart2Heart

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
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by the sea
2 posted 2009-08-09 04:28 AM


you deliver such poignant portraits, always enjoyable.

yann

XGarapanX
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since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435
Antarctica
3 posted 2009-08-09 11:02 AM


As always, so much renedered with so few words. Magic.

·´~`·­»Brett«­·´~`·

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