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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2009-08-08 07:28 PM



In the Sweetness of the Night

She's such a delite
in the sweetness
of the night,
my honey,
my darling,
my beautiful lover.
I'll bet that
you can't guess
how much I love her,
well perhaps you can
if you can understand
how far love can go,
how fast love can grow,
as if there is
no tomorrow...

JamesLee
07August
2009






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Earth Angel
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1 posted 2009-08-08 08:35 PM


"I'll bet that
you can't guess
how much I love her,"

~ Oh, yes, I can!!!

May all your nights be sweet, Hawaii Man!


Linda

LindsayP
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2 posted 2009-08-08 09:22 PM



You are a very lucky man James, and I enjoyed your poem.

Lindsay

XGarapanX
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3 posted 2009-08-09 12:06 PM


This was beautiful

·´~`·­»Brett«­·´~`·

2islander2
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4 posted 2009-08-09 02:25 PM


Hi James, enjoyed your poem, tonic and lovely.thanks for sharing.

yann

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5 posted 2009-08-09 04:58 PM


James,

I think I have an idea how much you love her.  You have dropped a few clues in wonderful poems like this one.

Alison

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