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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2009-08-08 04:56 PM


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After rain
Blue sky

Sunlight shadows
A cool breeze

Clear water
Over colored pebbles

Nowhere to go
No wish to leave


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Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
1 posted 2009-08-08 05:13 PM


Yo John,

This is a very peacefil write.  Say hello to Wang Wei for me.

Bobby

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
2 posted 2009-08-08 05:40 PM


I wouldn't want to leave either. Peaceful.
                                      Ida

Yoinn
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since 2007-08-16
Posts 649
Michigan
3 posted 2009-08-08 05:49 PM


Very nice John

The zen is perfect.

Yoin

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
4 posted 2009-08-08 07:20 PM


Really nice...James
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