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XOx Uriah xOX
Senior Member
since 2006-02-11
Posts 1403
Virginia

0 posted 2009-08-08 03:25 PM



I sat silently,
watching a colony
of ants, laboring
to build their mound.
They were perfect
in their being.
For they were being...Ants.

For a brief moment,
my mind pictured
Hebrew slaves;
Stone cutters
and carriers;
Using up their lives,
constructing pyramids.

For a brief moment
I imagined them as
vain and confused
seekers, struggling
to erect Babel's tower,
in hopes of reaching
Heaven.

If this were so...
they would do better
to be as the acorn
that lay beside their mound;
which, with no thought...
no plan in mind...
just by being still...
will reach far greater heights.

But, it is not so.
The ants are just being...Ants.
The acorn is just being...Acorn.
And in...Being
They are perfect.

***

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Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
1 posted 2009-08-08 05:43 PM


Well, Larry I am honored to have inspired such a fine poem.
                                Ida

XGarapanX
Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435
Antarctica
2 posted 2009-08-08 06:52 PM


Definitely and inspired write!

·´~`·­»Brett«­·´~`·

terasinas
Member
since 2006-03-24
Posts 91
Michigan ... The Great Lakes
3 posted 2009-09-13 11:44 AM


Larry,

How have you been? I havent seen or talked with you in ages, so I thought I would look up pip and try and find you here, read a few poems and say hi. Hope you and your family are well ... I still think about my old friend from time to time and I just wanted him to know and send him a line. (((hugs)))
~tera

I always was facinated with ants, always loved trees. Ants love trees too, they make their homes in them, they cultivate aphid farms in them. Humans love trees too, they love to climb them, sit in their shade, make forts in them, chop em up and burn em down. Humans typically don't like ants, don't like trees that mess up their yards with leaves and twigs. Ants and Trees live in harmony with one another, Humans want everything on their terms. Ants and trees know their place, and enjoy being. Humans?


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