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ThisDiamond
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0 posted 2009-08-08 08:38 AM





The Call Of The Crane

Eternity speak easy cool, so often at twilight
Truth upheld on ebony seas, as stars embraced so tight
Lingering, a note held hopeful on one-legged gait
Captured my attention, settling silently to wait
Softly, stroked my ear, the thoughtful fret of blue
Folding my attention into waves of purple hue
Waiting for the music in the quiver of the wind
Perceiving of my cognizance, the Crane called back again
Time itself irrelevant, the prize a priceless find
Astute to all my weaknesses, my strength that call to bind
Enchanted by the summoning, an ancient nature hum
Intuit of my own soul song, accompaniment each strum
The build of sentimental waves that from the crane called out
Reverberated deepest in the caverns culled in doubt
Knowing, without knowing that this memory would remain
Ever to be rectified by the call of Crane

Copyright Kkh 8/7/09

© Copyright 2009 Kathleen Harris - All Rights Reserved
XGarapanX
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1 posted 2009-08-08 09:53 AM


This is the part I liked---


Eternity speak easy cool, so often at twilight
Truth upheld on ebony seas, as stars embraced so tight
Lingering, a note held hopeful on one-legged gait
Captured my attention, settling silently to wait
Softly, stroked my ear, the thoughtful fret of blue
Folding my attention into waves of purple hue
Waiting for the music in the quiver of the wind
Perceiving of my cognizance, the Crane called back again
Time itself irrelevant, the prize a priceless find
Astute to all my weaknesses, my strength that call to bind
Enchanted by the summoning, an ancient nature hum
Intuit of my own soul song, accompaniment each strum
The build of sentimental waves that from the crane called out
Reverberated deepest in the caverns culled in doubt
Knowing, without knowing that this memory would remain
Ever to be rectified by the call of Crane

·´~`·­»Brett«­·´~`·

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2 posted 2009-08-10 08:27 PM


I loved the flow of it...an enjoyable read
dear K.  Keep it up Gurl...(smile)

brneyedgrly
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3 posted 2009-08-10 10:20 PM



your writing is always silky soft

enjoyed!

shellie


Chalmette Guy
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4 posted 2009-08-11 09:07 AM


I always am somehow comforted by your rhymes Kathy. Effortless to read and absorb.
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