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secondhanddreampoet
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0 posted 2009-08-06 09:58 PM


         Lake Solitude
           [Wyoming]

lonely pines march across
the grand triumvirate horizon
of sharp sunset mountains
and vast cloud-swept sky
that meet the deep azure lake
in mirror-perfect solitude
  and serenity.

          --- b. e. adams (8/6/2009)

© Copyright 2009 Bruce E. Adams Jr. - All Rights Reserved
Robert E. Jordan
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1 posted 2009-08-06 10:06 PM


Yo Secondhanddreampoet,

I like your choice of words in this clever little poem.

Bobby

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2 posted 2009-08-06 11:52 PM


Sounds like a perfect place the way you tell it

·´~`·­»Brett«­·´~`·

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3 posted 2009-08-07 08:49 AM


Interesting imagery...trees 'marching' in a place of solitude.  
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4 posted 2009-08-07 11:23 AM


Beautiful, Bruce.  Just beautiful.

A

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5 posted 2009-08-07 12:40 PM


the only part of Wyoming that I know, is desolate! lol

you always paint us such a pretty picture...
makes me want to go camping

Heart2Heart
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6 posted 2009-08-07 02:11 PM


For a second I thought you were writing of my homeland Scotland dear poet   Lovely little delightful ditty.
Heart2Heart

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7 posted 2009-08-10 01:23 PM


Wow, this was totally a breathtaking experience. You really know how to express yourself and the beauty of Mother Nature through the ink that spills from your elegant pen.


ARCTIC WIND

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