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Robert E. Jordan
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0 posted 2009-08-06 09:08 PM


Bones and his band of street urchins
are out howling like banshees.  

Running up and down the street,
they don’t care about nothing,
and that’s just fine.  

It’s when they’re quiet
that you have to worry.  

Then you know they’re
planning something,
plotting some outrageous
disorder,
and threat to the general
public safety.  

It’s a real bad sign
when they’re quiet.

It’s then best
to turn out the lights,
lock the doors,
and pretend
no one’s at home.

Bobby

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1 posted 2009-08-07 12:48 PM


Yeah and then they think that the house if okay to rob.  I keep my lights on and my ears tuned - and I sing ...

Ali's got a gun.
Ali's got a gun.
She ain't havin' no fun
So Ali's got a gun.

Aerosmith sings it better, but my message is easy to understand.

A


Robert E. Jordan
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2 posted 2009-08-07 10:15 AM


Thanks dear Alison,

For reading and commenting.  

I don’t own a gun, and don’t need one.  I’d be afraid of shooting one of the neighbors like Bones.  

The hood is noted for its burglars, books have been written about them.  “Confessions of A Second Story Man—Junior Kripplebauer and the K & A Gang”.  Needless to say we don’t steal from each other here.  

Love Bobby

XGarapanX
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3 posted 2009-08-07 07:13 PM


It’s a real bad sign
when they’re quiet.
Yup!

·´~`·­»Brett«­·´~`·

Robert E. Jordan
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4 posted 2009-08-07 08:21 PM


Thanks Brett,

I'm pleased that you agree.

Bobby

XGarapanX
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5 posted 2009-08-10 04:40 PM


But I actually believe it's better to turn on ALL the lights and put up cardboard silhouettes of "people with guns" in every window.

·´~`·­»Brett«­·´~`·

Robert E. Jordan
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6 posted 2009-08-10 04:59 PM


Yo Brett,

The gang would mark your house for special treatment.

Bobby

brneyedgrly
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7 posted 2009-08-10 10:03 PM



yo bobby

I always listened for the quiet...had my son convinced that I had eyes in the back of my head...really!

love,  

shellie


Robert E. Jordan
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8 posted 2009-08-10 10:07 PM


Thanks dear Shellie,

That's very tricky of you to do that.  I bet they still believe that to be true.

Love Bobby


2islander2
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9 posted 2009-08-11 05:08 AM


Hello Bobby, this is a little scary, however i like the description and the atmosphere of the pôem...Thanks for tghe poem.
yann

Robert E. Jordan
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10 posted 2009-08-11 08:12 AM


Thanks Yann,

There's no need to be scared.  Bones and his gang are harmless.  They were out in front of the house late last night making a fuss.

Bobby

GBride
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11 posted 2009-08-11 06:35 PM


It's always the harmless ones that get you.  Just when you think your safe they strike. A fellow should wear kevlar just in case.
Robert E. Jordan
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12 posted 2009-08-11 07:04 PM


Thanks GBride,

For reading and commenting.

Bobby

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