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unboundpoetess
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since 2008-05-24
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0 posted 2009-08-06 05:10 PM



velvet flesh of flowered life
earthen violin and mother
mortal and immortal still
in blood and seed and newborn breath
her secrets tempt and syrup
ripe to pour when strings are swept
and strummed to hum
of sacrosanct fire
and man's tempting
his want to brand and slave
yet her beauty is her own
murmured hymns and well's
waters of depth and creation
of gods and deity designed
a goddess despite her yearning
for flesh and punishment glistening
and plums pearl to seek her mystery
to release the salt of making
and when lips move her blooming
she swells and parts the veil
a jewel sighing ancient notes
and legends of their musk
and she will gift them their desire
when yoni moans her music

a universe hinges
on the liquid of her tears

© Copyright 2009 Heather - All Rights Reserved
BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
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By the Seaside
1 posted 2009-08-06 05:15 PM


This is magical, the beauty is so vibrant and seemingly radiates off the page!!
XGarapanX
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since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435
Antarctica
2 posted 2009-08-06 11:54 PM


Whoa! Beautiful, graceful, cleverly written, and REALLY steamy.

·´~`·­»Brett«­·´~`·

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
3 posted 2009-08-07 07:36 AM


ms UBP...she is amazing how she seduces and captures and acts nonchalant..enjoyed this
Chalmette Guy
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since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257
Louisiana
4 posted 2009-08-07 10:32 AM


Whoa...incredible. I am in awe of you.
angellea
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since 2009-03-29
Posts 144
NC, USA
5 posted 2009-08-26 11:09 PM


only you could make "yoni" sound so beautiful...well, maybe one other writer, but he will remain nameless. ;-)*wink-wink*

forgive me for being a bit blunt...why the heck has this not stayed at the top of the page?!?


smooches,

me

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
6 posted 2009-08-26 11:29 PM


Truly awesome tribute to yoni, dear Heather, so delicately sensuous and universal.

It is 5.30am here. Couldn't sleep anymore and came in for a peek. I had missed this, glad it came up again. It is uniquely captivating.

Love,
Margherita

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