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Master
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since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867
Boston, MA

0 posted 2009-08-06 04:59 PM


My sixth sense says:
- “Do what you want”
God will forgive our sins,
Since we won’t.

There’s nothing left to explain -
It’s as plain as daylight -
Why extend this pain,
Leave it by the wayside.

Don’t think of it twice.
It’s wise to walk away certain.
It was all rather nice,
It’s becoming a burden

To carry (nothing inside)
All of it on our shoulders
While pretending to glide,
With the weight of a boulder.


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martiniat8
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since 2003-06-21
Posts 897
Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic
1 posted 2009-08-06 07:04 PM


God, man, ain't that the TRUTH? Well said!
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