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Suncleaver
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0 posted 2009-08-06 04:38 PM



My name shall etch this age of shame
In flowing words of writhing flame,
I walk in shadow, bearing fire,
My beauty grim, and aspect dire.

I raise my hand, and ravens fly,
They call my lust with every cry,
I'll reap the crop of virgin's tears,
I hold no truth to quell their fears.

A shadow dance for winter night,
I will not feel the chilling bite,
For wreathed in silk, or drenched in sin
I'll drain the warmth of woman's skin.

Their passion, given, taken, mine,
Is drank from lips of ruby wine,
The trembling souls, vampiric kiss,
A feast of flesh to feed their bliss.

A man again, each rising morn,
Awoke unto a fiery dawn,
I flee the ever burning plane
Of love's intolerable pain.


And on that note, it's off to Spain to party again for two weeks.

Farewell ladies and gents.

© Copyright 2009 Luke Doubtfire - All Rights Reserved
Yoinn
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1 posted 2009-08-06 06:46 PM


Great Poem and have fun.!

Yoin

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party on Luke
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3 posted 2009-08-06 07:14 PM


Nice 'departure' write! Enjoy your holiday.
LindsayP
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4 posted 2009-08-06 09:34 PM



Hi Luke, you are a great poet my friend and I thoroughly enjoyed you romantic poem. Have a great holiday in Spain. I went and seen a bullfight in Plaza de Toro in Madrid many years ago. Very friendly people.

Lindsay

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5 posted 2009-08-07 12:15 PM


Suncleaver,

This is amazing.  I love this poem and have decided that I am just going to keep it.  So, while you are in Spain - I am robbing your words!  Have fun

Alison

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6 posted 2009-08-07 04:08 AM


Luke, it certainly sounds like you need a holiday! Ole! Enjoy! Wine, women, & song!

We'll be waiting your return!

Big hug,
Linda

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7 posted 2009-08-08 12:39 PM


Very timely poem. Have fun in Spain, Luke.
                                      Ida

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