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Yoinn
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0 posted 2009-08-05 08:42 PM



You are my angel

I stroke you face as you sleep,
Feeling the emotional stitches
That my precious angel
Has endured.

You called me
and said only

“Daddy”

before your tears came.

Two loves are here now
The one that pains you,
And mine the one
That comforts.

Yoin

Larry Silverstein purchased the Twin Towers 5 mths before 911 bombing. He already owned bld 11. He took out "terrorist" ins on these buildings. He was

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ThisDiamond
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1 posted 2009-08-05 09:48 PM


We endure far better than to watch our loved ones endure.  Very touching write.
That gentle stroke conveyed through your words.

This is Tamma
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2 posted 2009-08-05 09:49 PM


aww so sweet... beautifully done
viking_metal
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In a Jeep, Minnesota.
3 posted 2009-08-05 10:04 PM


Pretty.
Paul

I love my dog, and my truck. It's that simple, really.

Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16
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4 posted 2009-08-06 12:48 PM


Touching and comforting at the same time, Yoinn.
                               Ida

XGarapanX
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5 posted 2009-08-06 12:54 PM


I adore the thoughts in this piece.

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·

martiniat8
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6 posted 2009-08-06 01:07 AM


love this, so simple and sweet
D.Lester Young
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7 posted 2009-08-06 02:02 AM


Stroked verse of eloquence from a poet.
Margherita
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8 posted 2009-08-06 03:49 AM


Extremely touching, dear Tim! You said it beautifully.

I wish it would happen between my husband and my daughter. The love is there certainly, but not expressed and then suddenly it might be too late.

Love,
Margherita

Yoinn
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9 posted 2009-08-07 11:26 PM


Thanks TD. for all your praise.

Yoin

Yoinn
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10 posted 2009-08-07 11:27 PM


Tamma and Paul.. thanks so much for replying.

Yoin

Yoinn
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11 posted 2009-08-07 11:29 PM


Ida and Garapan.

Thank you for reading this and replying.

Yoin

Yoinn
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12 posted 2009-08-07 11:30 PM


DLY thank you very much

Yoin

Yoinn
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13 posted 2009-08-07 11:31 PM


thank you "M".

I hope it happens for your family too.

Yoin

Klassy Lassy
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14 posted 2009-08-08 12:23 PM


I was caught unawares with this one and tears welled instantly.  Dad's are such angels, too.  I watch my husband with my daughters;  sometimes he groans inwardly, but he's always there for them.  

Very poignant, effective heart-speak! *heart*

Oklahoma Rose
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15 posted 2009-08-08 12:49 PM


Awwww, what a sweet touching write.
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