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JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2009-08-05 07:34 PM


She's An Angel

I call her
and she doesn't answer.
Must already be working
and so I stay
alone in my thoughts
thinking about angel
and the words I
want to say to her.
For now, they are thoughts
whirling around in my head,
thoughts wanting to become words,
words that will flow
from my heart into her ears.
Soft words I know
she wants to hear.
Words like "Darling I miss you,
and I wish that you were here."
She's gorgeous.
She's precious.
She's marvelous.
She's magnificent.
She's an angel.

JamesLee
03 August
2009







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Yoinn
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since 2007-08-16
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Michigan
1 posted 2009-08-05 07:55 PM


ah and she lucky to have someone like you. Nice poem

Yoin

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
2 posted 2009-08-05 08:02 PM


Dear James, you are an Angel to her too, no doubt.
I love it when you write with such tender enthusiasm.

Love,
Margherita

JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2009-08-06 07:09 PM


Thank you Yoinn and Margherita for the wonderful responses...James
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