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Open Poetry #45

She is Music

Chalmette Guy
Senior Member

since 2009-03-11

Posts 1257
Louisiana

0 posted 2009-08-05 08:57 AM

She is music of most melodic type
As if the wind through angels create her
Of bangles, golden harps and silver pipes,
One must be hallowed by God to hear her
She carries clearly, ever so clearly
And all stop short to listen to her song
That those angels created so dearly
With notes on measures delicate, yet strong
She can whisper a soft and slow cadence,
And rise in quickening notes of glory
Each chord a specific form of patience
And each note sings her eternal story

She is music fashioned of hopes and fears
She is music to these, my tone deaf ears

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2009-08-05 06:45 PM

You resonate so beautifully to this music you chant, dear J..

quote:
One must be hallowed by God to hear her

This thought is so special.

Love,
Margherita

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

2 posted 2009-08-05 06:50 PM

as if you were talking about angels, how lovely the image of this...and the music too....

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I never let one moment define me,
I define myself by all moments and how they teach and touch me......02

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2009-08-05 10:15 PM

I've been away awhile, and come home
to this song.

This is magical, beautiful, one for the
sages...

You've only honed your work, I can tell.
Write on, Poet.

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