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Johan
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0 posted 2009-08-05 08:16 AM


Late November for Shirley


I remember your happy smile
The way you walked with me, hand in hand
Through the Autumn leaves of late November
Even though you were in pain
But now my love you are free
Your quiet suffering has gone
I still walk those paths
Where your smile lit up the shadows
And in my heart I hear your joyfull happy laugh
You have gone where the sun always shines
Where there is no darkness that you hated
As the evening draws close, I remember
Sleep well my love, I shall walk those paths
In the falling leaves of late November.

© Copyright 2009 Andrew Shiston - All Rights Reserved
angellea
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since 2009-03-29
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1 posted 2009-08-05 11:01 AM


this is so touching...such a beautiful tribute to your dear shirley.
Heart2Heart
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2 posted 2009-08-05 01:56 PM


Beautiful and loving words for Shirley, I was so sorry when I heard she had died Johan.  I knew that what you had was very special.  
Katriona

Yoinn
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3 posted 2009-08-05 05:38 PM


this makes my heart hurt. It is good poetry. Thanks for it

Yoin

JamesMichael
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4 posted 2009-08-05 07:16 PM


Fine writing...James
Alwye
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5 posted 2009-08-06 12:06 PM


This is so sad, but beautiful at the same time.  A wonderful tribute indeed.
Marchmadness
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6 posted 2009-08-06 12:55 PM


A touching and lovely tribute, Johan.
                              Ida

Bill Charles
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7 posted 2009-08-06 06:36 PM


Johan - this is such a touching write, and it touched me deeply... Wish you well...

BC

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