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Strong Tower |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA 
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 I'm crumbling You, my strong tower protect me from faulty feelings my heart falling apart beneath my feet I'm spiraling out of control I'm no longer myself I can't control my thoughts I am choking I am blind I am ashamed to touch your face I'm consumed I don't feel as if I'm worthy of your love My strong tower, out of my grasp Will you come and rescue me be the beacon of reasoning be the light in the darkness I want to whither in your arms and die in your eyes Bring me back to life Resurrect my faith I'm dead in this world Dead to my friends Dead to the ones I love Dead to me I am dying to live and living to die to be rescued by you, my strong tower The only time we waste is the time we spend thinking we are alone. |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Kris, I think your poetry shows your strength and beauty. I think it shows your emotion and compassion. I think it shows you. And I like what I see. xoxoxo Alison |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
There is such strength in this vulnerability. Amazing. ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Kris, Your poetry has always been your strongest resource on this site - it give life to the world of living... It is so good to see you once again!  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I'm reeling from the intensity of your plea ~ the power of your words. You sure know how to stir the emotions of your readers with emotive, spiritual poems such as this. You're an amazing writer. No matter what befalls you in life, your strength and faith pull you through the troubled waters. As you know, God and His angels are always with you.   Linda |
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