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N|D|N|C|Lost-Poet
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since 2009-07-30
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New Orleans

0 posted 2009-08-04 08:21 PM


People can't seem to understand. Why-

I say I live a life of poverty-

And. Love.

Why don't you come find me?

I'm just a lonely boy in this deep blue sea...

Love.

Why don't you come find me-?

Well,

They say theirs plenty of fish, I just can't see-

That I'm blinded by my misery-

Oh-

But I love the moonlight,

Sending chills all across my skin,

Now-

I see my future now and again.

Just give me one more reason, To, Pretend.

And, I'll lay down this scripture to make amends-.

"We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." Oscar Wilde

© Copyright 2009 Zachariah Gavia-Peyton - All Rights Reserved
priyanka
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since 2009-06-15
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india
1 posted 2009-10-07 03:30 PM


If someone knew why!!
Wow again !!
You keep Wowing me too often!!

GBride
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since 2009-07-02
Posts 538

2 posted 2009-10-07 06:23 PM


A very interesting write. That moon light can be chilly. i like your poem!!!
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