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Rembrandts on the Wall
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Rembrandts on the Wall |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana 
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As I close my eyes I can picture it all How it just came together How it then came to fall Back then was another time Seems like another age We were actors amongst ourselves Waiting to take to stage Performing our little scenes and Portraying our parts With unconscious ease and Speaking from sleeping hearts Learning to hit the marks And entrances on cue Graceful movements And improvising a line or two Until finally act three Comes to resolution The applause helps With the absolution The curtain must come down The audience disappears and somehow We go back to being fitful strangers After taking the final bow And finally, as I close my eyes I see pictures of us on the wall How we seemed to come together How we then came to fall |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
Masterfully painted. ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
CG, I love how you write of relationships. This builds so nicely and I really appreciated the analogy to a play. Good job. A |
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