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Elizabeth Santos
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0 posted 2009-08-04 08:37 AM



Splendor vanished
I am saving it for
Tomorrow's sunset

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Chalmette Guy
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1 posted 2009-08-04 08:51 AM


For me?? You shouldn't have Elizabeth.

Just kidding. Here's to tomorrow's sunset.

XGarapanX
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2 posted 2009-08-04 10:28 AM


Sad yet hopeful.

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·

Oklahoma Rose
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3 posted 2009-08-04 11:33 AM


Elizabeth, you are as good with these haikus, as you are anything thing else you write. Not only is it fantastic, but it is beautiful, too.
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4 posted 2009-08-05 01:29 AM


Loverly - I'll take that over a box of chocolates any day.  You definitely a fair lady writer.

A

Nan
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5 posted 2009-08-05 08:10 AM


With sunset waning
Arise at the blush of dawn
Glorious sunrise




Sunshine
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6 posted 2009-08-05 10:09 PM


Unrequited love
Visits moonbeams, then sunstreams
Living in shadows


Yep.

It works!

A haiku for YOU!

Elizabeth Santos
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7 posted 2009-08-05 11:35 PM


Now THOSE are Haikus!
I never learned how to write them, but I have great teachers
Thanks
L[z

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