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Tomer
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0 posted 2009-08-02 11:26 PM


I was the wanderer
The man who left his wallet
Behind at the register drawer
And I wandered through the depths of the dessert
As the sky shaped the hole that I left when
I said this was it to my family.

I never left an id
A shoelace untied
Because I want to take my own path
With the lizards and coyotes
And thatÕs something I can fall back on.

Something that a wanderer can see
Underneath his hands
And underneath the rhythm of
Those that see their ties flapping
To the winds of stoplights.

The chase anew
It's  a wanderers passport, now.


[This message has been edited by Tomer (08-03-2009 09:02 AM).]

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1 posted 2009-08-03 08:11 PM


Reading this made me wonder if you came from a desert, and here I see you're in Michigan.

Enjoyed this piece very much.

2islander2
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2 posted 2009-08-04 10:57 AM


enjoyed a lot the poem and its philosophy.

yann

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