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My Life. |
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thoughtfulthinker New Member
since 2009-07-22
Posts 9 |
Lost in the caliginosity Lost all alone. My mind starts screaming Where do I go Cynical reasons, how could this be? Hopeless thinking. I don't want to be me Pensive thoughts, what else do I have? Maybe someday It won't be this bad. Serene and calm. expecting the best. this is what I want. But i'm only fearful in the least. Forever will I be lost Upon this terrene? Obscurity, will it end? maybe someday.. My real life will begin. Until then i'll just wait wait for it to end Patient and tranquil Harmonious and halcyon. What I dream to feel. Darkness will cease to exist and luminous life will begin something I can't resist. Yet this dread life goes on. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Hello thoughtfulthinker...you have such a list of reasons for sadness in this poem, yet you are hoping for something better. I hope you are able to keep your mind focused on the good things around you also, then soon they will come. Writing about it is good. Love that word, caliginosity. |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
I agree with Martie! And, yes writing is good theraphy, they say. |
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