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unboundpoetess Member
since 2008-05-24
Posts 477
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I really never wanted to be a pretty girl mingling in tidepools of other pretty girls I want to rise matchless against the posing stars scintillating in my flame branding your secrets with fingertip perfume and you will smell me in the center of a thousand pretty smiles and cry for depths and thirsting when I make my own wine and frost your glass with breath of lip petal glossing should you ever dive the wilds of these waters and swim open mouthed against froth of pinked waves when there is no salt on other lips like mine and I am your woman there in never forget oceans what of pretty girls I will breathe and you will know it by name H [This message has been edited by unboundpoetess (08-04-2009 06:25 PM).] |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Fantastic, dear Heather! I tell you you have all the numbers to be matchless like this! This is what confidence and deep knowing are all about. Your poetic skills are also outstanding, dear girl. Love, Margherita  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
A woman who knows herself and is comfortable in her own skin is prettier than pink! Mind you, you happen to be pretty on the outside ~ as well as on the inside! ~ So that's a double bonus! Heather, you are a very skilled poetess ~ and I love how the real you comes shining through your poetry. I like you!  Love 'n a big warm hug, Linda  |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
To really know oneself is the key to great confidence, and self-esteem. You are indeed a beautiful girl. |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
"and you will smell me in the center of a thousand pretty smiles and cry for depths and thirsting when I make my own wine and frost your glass with breath of lip petal glossing" Confidence is the most beautiful thing in the world, and nothing can quite match it. Enjoyed your work. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms ubp...the flavor and scent is the most lovely part of pretty..enjoyed this ms |
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angellea Member
since 2009-03-29
Posts 144NC, USA |
i am woman, hear me roar!!! 'bout time that confidence started showing up. ;-) love, me |
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unboundpoetess Member
since 2008-05-24
Posts 477 |
Margherita You give me cause to smile...thank you dear one. Linda Oh lovey, I like you too! Always welcoming the warmth of those wings...thank you. Miss Rose Took some time to find me again. You are loveliness, thank you. K I am grateful for the treat of your reply...Your words are truth...I hate it took me so long to remember. TY D Thank you friend for appreciating...smooch. Me Thank you dahling...you know, I came all the way from France, just for you...*giggles* Love, Heather |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
This is so passionate, the deep blue sea never read so well. Your poem is refreshing and comes in quiet waves. Wonderful reading, H~ |
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unboundpoetess Member
since 2008-05-24
Posts 477 |
Thank you so very much, lovely Blues... It is always delightful to see you here! Love, Heather |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
You stand way above the other pretty girls. They aren't poets like you. I love how you stand tall in this poem Alison |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana |
Not mingling in tidepools? That's where I mingle. lol Beautiful and powerful. All the good 'ful's Heather. Amazed at the depth, but not shocked anymore. |
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unboundpoetess Member
since 2008-05-24
Posts 477 |
Aw Alison (((( huggles )))) That reply brought big smiles! Thank you! Jer Thanks for all of those 'fuls, buddy. My shock value is gone..? Now what am I gonna do.. Love to you, H |
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Bloodline Member
since 2009-05-23
Posts 236Oklahoma |
Well, sounds of Heaven on Earth, yes, I most surely hear music, in the heart of poetic words, rich and pretty melody, Bloodline |
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unboundpoetess Member
since 2008-05-24
Posts 477 |
Oh Bloodline, you bless me... Thank you. L, Heather |
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Suncleaver Member
since 2009-01-18
Posts 481Stafford England |
I've been absent a while, and this is the first poem that I have read by you. I am stunned by the delicacy of your articulate form. |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
My critique tends to fall short because I only know by instinct and not by instruction what works. So... amazing. ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· |
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unboundpoetess Member
since 2008-05-24
Posts 477 |
Suncleaver~ Thank you dear for such a pleasing reply. I hope you will come by again..? Garapan~ Your amazing is a gift. Thanks so much. L, Heather |
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