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vandana
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0 posted 2009-08-02 11:59 AM





Fill In My Heart

Fill my heart
With your love
Fill my heart with peace and harmony
Give us happiness and forgiveness
I may learn to speak
the words of love
Fill my heart
With my sweet song
Where I can walk through his path
Follow my dreams
Through this daylight
Make it right
Where night grows cold
Fill my heart
With love


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Earth Angel
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1 posted 2009-08-02 12:04 PM


vandana, your is filled with "sweet song" already!

"I may learn to speak
the words of love"

~ and you speak the word of love that melt the hearts of your readers.

May your heart forever sing and be overflowing with love!

Love,
Linda

Margherita
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2 posted 2009-08-02 01:36 PM


quote:
Give us happiness and forgiveness
I may learn to speak
the words of love



Beautiful thoughts, dear Vandana, well expressed!

Love,
Margherita

Kaoru
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3 posted 2009-08-02 01:55 PM


I tried to highlight a few lines I enjoyed most, and ended up highlighting the entire thing! lol

Enjoyed this very much.

nakdthoughts
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4 posted 2009-08-02 02:58 PM


"Fill my heart with peace and harmony", I think that is what everyone wishes for~~

nicely done

M

Marchmadness
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5 posted 2009-08-02 03:16 PM


This is like a beautiful prayer, vandana.
                                    Ida

thoughtfulthinker
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6 posted 2009-08-02 03:33 PM


This is really good
I love it!

martiniat8
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7 posted 2009-08-02 03:52 PM


Amen!
Alison
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8 posted 2009-08-03 03:06 AM


Most lovely, dear vandana.

Alison

peaceseaker
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9 posted 2009-08-03 08:44 AM


"I may learn to speak
the words of love"

I too have to say that the above was a great vs...or line...liked the format of this as well....enjoyed....Peaceseaker

sunnydaze
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10 posted 2009-08-05 04:24 PM


so lovely!  really enjoyed this..


Oklahoma Rose
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11 posted 2009-08-05 05:28 PM


"Fill my heart with peace and harmony", sounds like a great idea to me. But, I do think you already have that love.
2islander2
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12 posted 2009-08-08 06:18 AM


the most simple words are the most precious,enjoyed your lovely poem.

yann

Klassy Lassy
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13 posted 2009-08-08 06:58 PM


What marvel comes when we ask for love.  Tangents become circles and soul becomes reflection.  I'm not sure we would ever come to know what a poem really is without it.  Soft words, tender lines, and life devining!     Soft petals here.

Karen


Robert E. Jordan
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14 posted 2009-08-08 06:59 PM


Yo dear Vandana,

This is lovely work Hon.

It's good to see you are in the USA now.

Love Bobby

Bill Charles
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15 posted 2009-08-08 07:04 PM


vandana - wonderful writing...

BC

LindsayP
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16 posted 2009-08-08 09:18 PM



Hi Vandana, a most enjoyable write my friend
you wrote it well.

Lindsay

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