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peaceseaker
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0 posted 2009-08-01 03:16 PM



Ailerons of Life
Everchanging, re-arranging figures in space and time.
Fluid movement, weaving abstract patterns, blending colours
of brilliant light and tickling ones fascination....

Daring speeds, breathless heights, flipping blind,
landing on the edge, testing the boundaries of precision.
Faces of joy, masks of sadness, vision of madness with
what by all reason, appears endless imagination....

Ever trusting in split decisions, air control, tuck under
and break, roll and catch, belly to belly position. Back
to back rhythm and timing, slow passage into what is
not truly known. Angels and butterflies ellegant and
graceful, in their agility to go with the ebb and flow
of the launching. A never ending cycle of deference.

To reach the bar, touch the floor, pitch ourselves into
thin air, unsure of how one might land, burn and crash or
roll with the understanding of like minds. Spectators look
on reeling and unaware, hoping for the same inspriration.

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1 posted 2009-08-01 03:26 PM


Great use of your vocabulary here. Enjoyed.
Oklahoma Rose
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2 posted 2009-08-01 07:31 PM


A great write.
peaceseaker
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3 posted 2009-08-07 09:44 PM


Good Grief...I'm sorry for my late response, had forgotten that I posted this one...thank you so much for reading and taking the time to comment...it always means a great deal...
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