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peaceseaker
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0 posted 2009-08-01 03:13 PM



Running Through Life

Shadows of mystery and moon of delight,
spotting; glimpsing natures beautiful sights
Trees bending in a soft whispering breeze,
listening to silence and joyful peace.

Come with me my love on a cloud of dreams,
riding the rainbow of colorful streams
tip-toe my heart through the key of your soul
gather flowing flowers to make us whole

Grab my hand and let us run to the sea
in a world alone only you and me.....
spilling waves upon the sand as we kiss
tender embraces in the dusky mist


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Earth Angel
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1 posted 2009-08-01 05:26 PM


Like a breath of fresh, spring air!
What a glorious way of "running through life".

"Come with me my love on a cloud of dreams,
riding the rainbow of colorful streams"

This is fresh, sweet ~ and decidedly delightful!

Makes me smile from the inside out!


EA

Oklahoma Rose
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2 posted 2009-08-01 07:29 PM


A beautiful romantic poem!
peaceseaker
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3 posted 2009-08-02 05:43 PM


Thank you both so much for reading and commenting....glad you enjoyed..peaceseaker
brneyedgrly
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4 posted 2009-08-02 10:59 PM



very romantic!

i like it



shel

my mind won't rest and I don't sleep...
not even in my dreams ~ s. nicks

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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5 posted 2009-08-03 04:13 AM


oh my goodness! this is truly a joy to read! wonderfully expressed

hugs RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

peaceseaker
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6 posted 2009-08-07 05:52 PM


brneyedgrly-thank you for reading and commenting...glad you liked it....
peaceseaker
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7 posted 2009-08-07 05:52 PM


Roniece-Thank's for taking the time to read, and leave such a lovely comnpliment....
peaceseaker
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8 posted 2009-08-12 06:52 AM


Oklahoma Rose and Earth Angel..did not mean to bypass your lovely compliments.they are greatly appreciated...thank you....ps
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