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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. What a wonderfully Cool August day Do I detect A touch of autumn In the air I almost feel Like laughing With the breeze The phone rings Four times I don’t Even bother To go inside What does that Have to do with me . |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Ah, I feel the joy of August already also. So happy the summer is almost at its end. Enjoyed your work. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
"Cool August day ...", oh, I envy you, we are melting here. But there is something cool in here, it's your poem! M |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
not cool here, but a beautiful breeze when on the porch swing...and I, like you today, dismiss the phone ~~ M |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I, too, would prefer "laughing with the breeze" than be indoors talking on the phone.  This is a delightful 'Kodak Moment"! A big, breezy hug from a fellow "Nobody", EA  |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
It hasn't been very cool here. |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
what does it have to do, indeed...  shel my mind won't rest and I don't sleep... |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
We are going to have an early winter. The fireweed has almost gone to seed - and I have no interest in the phone when I am home. Alison |
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jbstillwater Member
since 2009-07-03
Posts 216Albuquerque, New Mexico |
There is something about the shadows this time of year, even though it is 95 degrees in the desert! Good writing Jan |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
such mastering..Great work. yann |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
I don't answer the phone if I don't feel like it. If it's important I'll call back. If I could get a cool breeze around here that would be important. Ida |
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Misty Lilacs Senior Member
since 2005-11-15
Posts 1060White Birch Forest |
We here in the northeast of the US have only had maybe 3 days like this. It was refreshing to read your words and it makes me long for this type of day. ooxx ________________________ |
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