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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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0 posted 2009-07-31 10:49 PM



You gift me smiles
You gift me friendship
You gift me laughter
You gift me moments to enjoy
you gift me well...

and a day
without a smile
is a day
forever lost

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

© Copyright 2009 Roniece Dawson-Bruce - All Rights Reserved
Oklahoma Rose
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1 posted 2009-07-31 11:26 PM


These are all wonderful gifts to recieve, Roniece. I love this wonderful poem. I so enjoy everything you write.
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2 posted 2009-07-31 11:29 PM


I'd like to have each day filled with at least one smile, even if it's forced from me!

Enjoyed your poem.

The Shadow in Blue
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3 posted 2009-08-01 12:09 PM


Your poetry gifts this online community that much and more Roniece.


Jill

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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4 posted 2009-08-01 02:02 AM


my sweet Sue, Kaoru, and Jill.. thank you for your wonderful comments... it is nice to be gifted with friendships as warm as yours

RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

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5 posted 2009-08-01 02:12 AM


You know sometimes when I am not smiling people think I am in a bad mood.  I find it easier to smile a lot than to explain that my face just is in a bad mood -- I am not.

xoxoxo
and



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Rick
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6 posted 2009-08-01 09:23 AM


A gift we should receive each day my friend, you have gifted us with your words here Roniece and a smile to remember, much enjoyed thank you.

Rick

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7 posted 2009-08-01 11:40 AM


Ya gets as good as ya gives, Sweetheart!

Smiling back at you, Radiant One!

This was precious ~ Just like you!


Lindylou

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8 posted 2009-08-01 02:59 PM


Hi Roniece....I have already read a couple of different peices by you..and have enjoyed them..and this one is no less enjoyable..what a thought, as I had to read it again to say, "You gift me" WoW....this was GREAT! peaceseaker
Margherita
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9 posted 2009-08-01 05:33 PM


Your heart unravels so beautifully here, dear Roniece. You are the gift, as you receive and accept with tender grace.

Love,
Margherita

LindsayP
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10 posted 2009-08-01 09:40 PM



and a day
without a smile
is a day
forever lost

How true that is oh wise one.
You wtote it so well dear Roniece
love and a big hug.

Lindsay

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11 posted 2009-08-01 10:04 PM


an especially fine ending!

"a day
  without a smile
  is a day
  forever lost"

v. good 'write' !

Robert E. Jordan
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12 posted 2009-08-01 10:05 PM


Yo dear RDB,

Smiles are always important.  This is a fine, and true poem.

Love Bobby

2islander2
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13 posted 2009-08-02 04:43 AM


Hello Roniece, thank you for sharing this truth : a day without smile is lost forever, may be we should have course somewhere to learn to smile.

have  a nice day

yann

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