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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2009-07-30 08:04 PM



Karaoke Girl


I have songs
I yearn to sing,
love songs from
the depths of my heart,
happy songs to bring laughter,
sad songs to cry real tears,
everyone is welcome
to laugh, to cry,
to sing along,
if only that
cute Karaoke girl
would play my song.


JamesLee
27July
2009

  

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Robert E. Jordan
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1 posted 2009-07-30 08:59 PM


Yo James,

This is a good poem.  I bet if you asked real nice, the young lady would play your song.

Bobby

Earth Angel
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2 posted 2009-07-31 10:30 AM


Knowing you, Hawaii Man, it won't be long before she plays your song!

Cute write, James!


Linda

D.Lester Young
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3 posted 2009-07-31 11:11 AM


I enjoyed this piece for it reminded me of a cute Karaoke girl I knew.
JamesMichael
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4 posted 2009-07-31 05:59 PM


Thank you Robert, Earth Angel and D. Lester for the wonderful responses...James
Oklahoma Rose
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5 posted 2009-07-31 09:17 PM


Well, I hope she does play your song.
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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6 posted 2009-07-31 09:19 PM


lovely James.. I do so like this!
RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

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7 posted 2009-07-31 09:28 PM


Good luck! Bet she will if you flash your James charm smile.
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