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Open Poetry #45

To My World

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

0 posted 2009-07-30 06:57 PM

To My World

They say
It can be done
It can say
From all of this
It's all of love
There are certain things
sometimes we don't get
In life
We have to struggle
To get
Let my thought become only a memory
To live
To walk away
When your love show me
Your strength
To my world
It's hard to control a thing
In this world
We may find somethings
But me may be not
Where world goes around?
Where I find myself alone
In this world
My heart would yearn
And may earn
May learn
In this world

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2009-07-30 07:10 PM

You have posted this lovely poem just a few days ago, dear Vandana. But, never mind, it was a pleasure to read it once again.

Love,
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

2 posted 2009-07-30 10:02 PM

Yo dear Vandana,

Life in this world is full of learning. This is very well said Hon.

Love Bobby

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2009-07-31 06:35 PM

Enjoyed...love always has new opportunities...James

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

4 posted 2009-07-31 07:01 PM

Enjoyed this wonderful work.

Oklahoma Rose
Senior Member

since 2008-02-28

Posts 1586
Oklahoma USA

5 posted 2009-07-31 08:59 PM

Nice write!

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

6 posted 2009-08-02 03:07 AM

Beautiful words bare repeating.

xoxoox
Alison

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

7 posted 2009-08-02 04:20 AM

Hello Vandana, I guess there are always things to learn even when you think you know everything...Thanks for the sweet and lovely poem.

yann

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